In the begin, they think they will stay there short time, and don't have many problem. They also angry and sad because they have to get out their house, stop their jobs... The kids feel tremble with excitement. At the ending the think it is unfair to put all of American Japanese in the camp.
I don't really understand the last sentence you was writing. You should write more about their feeling in the beginning.
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ReplyDeleteGood Edwin, but I agree with Thai. I think that if you explained a little more we'd have an easier time understanding your ideas.
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