Monday, January 10, 2011

question

How would you define the mood of the people on the bus at the beginning of the journey to Camp Harmony? at the end of the journey?
  In the begin, they think they will stay there short time, and don't have many problem. They also angry and sad because they have to get out their house, stop their jobs... The kids feel tremble with excitement.  At the ending the think it is unfair to put all of American Japanese in the camp.

3 comments:

  1. I don't really understand the last sentence you was writing. You should write more about their feeling in the beginning.

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  2. Good Edwin, but I agree with Thai. I think that if you explained a little more we'd have an easier time understanding your ideas.

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